Write your intent clearly
State what you are looking for and by when. A family reading your profile should understand the shape of the match before they reply.
Writing a strong Shia rishta profile
Worked examples of what a serious marriage profile actually says, and the mistakes that make families move on.
Say something about deen and practice
Sect, marja and level of practice belong in structured fields, not a paragraph someone has to guess at.
Family and expectations
Expectations of a spouse and the role of family are normal to state. They are also most of what families are actually deciding.